lunes, 17 de noviembre de 2008

Valeria's last post correction
In generally (w.e.) you can have a much (delete it) photograph (sp.) that you like very much, all (delete it) whit (sp.) beutifull (sp.) moments or spetial (sp.) signification (ww.). In my case I like to much the photograf whit my family or of landscape of plaes (sp.) that I visite (sp.) in any moument (sp.).A photoghaf(sp.) I like is one of (w prep.) Punta Arenas, the Torres del Paine, because this show (wvf) a greate (ww.) landscape, the magnificent (w adj f) of the Natural places y (and ?) I this transport (w v f) me to memories. This don´t (w aux ) show any people, but whit (sp.) this I remember (sp.) many moments.other (ww.) photograph (sp.) is a I state (what do you mean by “state”?) whit (sp.) my cousins in a summer in a (?), when I was four or five year (wnf) (sm.), (p.)



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WT=WRONG TENSE
WO=WRONG ORDER
MW=MISSING WORD
SP=SPELLING
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P=PUNCTUATION

lunes, 10 de noviembre de 2008

I would like know AUSTRALIA.

In my life I would like know deferens countries, the more possible, but the travel of my dreams is go to Australia, because I believe that this country whit many different things for be almost a complete continent, I see this as a great island, the more large in the all world, were the people has a different culture whit to much influence occidental (for me is a good mix) and also whit a animals that don’t be in other places of the world like to the caguros, coalas and more, all endemic fauna, in addition whit different landscapes beech, long deserts, forest, etc.
I would like to travel whit my boyfriend and my child, but no only as tourist, for life in this country only little time before to miss my family and my country, because I think maybe I have more opportunities for work and learn more, or also make a post grade and more time for know many places. Really I would like this very much, but I need make a first work before to go that is learn well English, for speak and write better (this is really difficult for me).

lunes, 3 de noviembre de 2008

Write about a photograph you like.
Say:Why you like it
Who took it
What it shows
When it was taken
In generaly you can have a much photograf that you like very much, all whit beutifull moments or spetial signification. In my case I like to much the photograf whit my family or of landscape of plaes that I visite in any moument.
A photoghaf I like is one of Punta Arenas, the Torres del Paine, because this show a greate landscape, the magnificent of the Natural places y I this transport me to memories.
This don´t show any people, but whit this I remenber many moments.
other photograf is a I state whit my cousins in a summer in a, when I was four or five year,